This was a really great article that made me think of social media in a different way. I feel as though you could have stated the section on cyberbullying better because it was a little wishy-washy. Instead of saying why it is so negative which removes ideas that Social Media is good, You should say something about how Cyberbullying is a problem but can be easily fixed by just doing_______. I am glad to have read your article and it is a great start. That was the only part that stood out to me as being a little off.
This was a lovely piece of writing. I really liked the realistic examples and descriptions you gave. This definitely persuaded me and changed my opinion for the better. The descriptions were all pretty accurate and relatable. Well done!
This was a really great article that made me think of social media in a different way. I feel as though you could have stated the section on cyberbullying better because it was a little wishy-washy. Instead of saying why it is so negative which removes ideas that Social Media is good, You should say something about how Cyberbullying is a problem but can be easily fixed by just doing_______. I am glad to have read your article and it is a great start. That was the only part that stood out to me as being a little off.
ReplyDeleteThis was a lovely piece of writing. I really liked the realistic examples and descriptions you gave. This definitely persuaded me and changed my opinion for the better. The descriptions were all pretty accurate and relatable. Well done!
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